Commit ab37fd0d authored by Sarah Mei's avatar Sarah Mei

Fix type-o on front page, copy edit a bit.

parent e72f4e1d
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already_account: "already have an account?"
login_here: "log in here"
choice: "Choice"
choice_explanation: "Diaspora allows you to sort your connections into groups called Aspects.
Unique to Diaspora, Aspects ensure your photos, stories and jokes are shared
with only the people you want them to be."
choice_explanation: "Diaspora lets you sort your connections into groups called aspects. Unique to Diaspora, aspects ensure that your photos, stories and jokes are shared only with the people you intend."
ownership: "Ownership"
ownership_explanation: "You own your pictures, and you shouldn’t have to give that up just in order
to share them. You maintain ownership of everything you share on Diaspora,
giving you full control over how it is distributed."
ownership_explanation: "You own your pictures, and you shouldn’t have to give that up just to share them. You maintain ownership of everything you share on Diaspora, giving you full control over how it's distributed."
simplicity: "Simplicity"
simplicity_explanation: "Diaspora makes sharing clean and easy this goes doubly so for privacy.
Innherently private, Diaspora doesn’t have pages of settings and options to
wade through to keep your profile secure and to your liking."
simplicity_explanation: "Diaspora makes sharing clean and easy and this goes for privacy too. Inherently private, Diaspora doesn’t make you wade through pages of settings and options just to keep your profile secure."
learn_about_host: "Learn about how to host your own Diaspora server"
learn_about_open_source: "Learn more about Diaspora as an open source project."
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